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The Stick by ~seductor14:iconseductor14:

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So frivolous in conception
So obsolete in design
The media has played a role in deception
In this deep addiction of mine

It seems the answer is cancer
And I can not disbar the tar

The obsession runs profoundly
The recklessness is never ending
Although soon I will be resting soundly
With these lungs in no way ever mending
©2005-2009 ~seductor14
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The Sick - a solitary cigarette, a loosey if you will >.< It is how it all begins, with just one drag, and from then on, it is an addiction with incredible force.

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:iconjerseygrl246:
*jerseygrl246 Sep 11, 2005, 1:17:11 PM
THANK YOU! i love you so much! everyone should read this! its a :+fav:!

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3 steps to living life:

1) Don't do anything stupid like drugs [link] (read that)
2) Get back at your enemies with kindness
3) Live everyday like it was your last.
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~seductor14 Sep 13, 2005, 3:36:00 PM
No, thank you! ^_^ That is very nice of you to speak such words about my poem. Also thanks a lot for putting a link to it in your signature! That is awesome ~_^
:iconjerseygrl246:
*jerseygrl246 Sep 13, 2005, 3:37:29 PM
lol, welcome! oh, and its no prob!

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3 steps to living life:

1) Don't do anything stupid like drugs [link] (read that)
2) Get back at your enemies with kindness
3) Live everyday like it was your last.
:iconcrimsonangel23:
~crimsonangel23 Sep 15, 2005, 5:11:54 AM
brilliant and well said! thank jerserygrl246, saw it in her sig :D

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Why the hell isn't there a brown M&M guy!!!
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~PerfectlyFlawed9 Sep 29, 2005, 7:18:28 PM
wow, i love it, its so strong and realistic yet poetic...awesome.
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~seductor14 Oct 10, 2005, 5:49:07 PM
Ah yes, It is because of her this particular piece is getting so many views. I am glad more people are reading it! I just wish they would take the time to read my other stuff too yah know? Anywho, thanks for your input ~_^
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~seductor14 Oct 10, 2005, 5:54:17 PM
I am glad you think so ^_^ I definitely inteded it to have a strong message since it is a 'short'. For me in particular, and I am sure with other people that smoke as well; this is taken much more emotionally, because we are addicted and we just can not escape this sad end! heh, well thank you so much for the comment ~_^
:iconcrimsonangel23:
~crimsonangel23 Oct 10, 2005, 5:59:33 PM
hmmm.... perhaps i should take a look then :D

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Why the hell isn't there a brown M&M guy!!!
:icongunni:
~Gunni Oct 15, 2005, 8:12:19 AM
Wow .. really nice concept and contrast ...

But a very true matter.
I :worship: you for bringing it up... Everybody needs to know!

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rozen flames of ice penetrated every being
and wiped out its precious flame of life..
[link]
:iconvoodoodeathgirl:
~voodoodeathgirl Nov 1, 2005, 4:47:36 PM
:thumbsup: Caught you in Jersey girl's sig!

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"I want to run through the streets naked with green jello all over my body, reading Playboy magazine. Why? Because I suddenly might feel the need to. Ok pal? I've seen the future. You know what it is?..."
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